I love how this story begins with a kind of mystery. I also love how many relationships story lines are happening. You have the grandparents and their relationship to Salamanca as well as her father and mother. You have Phoebe 'Peeby's relationship to her 'parents' as well as to Sal. You have Sal involved in everyone, through her eyes.
Some mysteries: What happened to Phoebe's mom that is similar to Sal's? Where are the mysterious letters coming from? Who is Mrs. Cadaver and what is her relationship to Sal's dad? Why does Sal need to hurry, hurry, hurry, rush, rush, rush? Why are her grandparents so ditzy?
I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter with you Jojo. Let's set a date to do that!
Love,
Baba
JOJO CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehow about we read the next 3 chapters?
ReplyDeleteStill have to pay bills, and get Peter to bed, but I'll try to read the next three chapters.
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